What do you think?

It's a bit too thin. I just am used to being amazed by my friends, but they draw a lotttt. If this is your first 'proper' sketch, it's pretty good, actually :) I am actually bad at drawing, but mistakes help you learn. I'm worse at drawing than you, you just recently learned, and your drawing skill will improve, but my drawing skill that I earned from drawing a lot is either equal or worse than the picture you posted :P Oh, well, drawing for fun is better than not drawing at all. I really think you could make some pretty good drawings in the future, but who knows. If your talent isn't drawing, it's something else :)