Critique Please ~

I'm really terrible at Lineart. I think I've done about four attempts in my entire life, and the most recent one was over a year ago. By most regards, this is my first lineart that I've actually worked on and watched a tutorial for. Please critique!!

http://doctorwho-vian.deviantart.com/art/Horse-Lineart-610961257?ga_submit_new=10%253A1464109655

You didn't make the lineart.

Do you mean colouring the lineart? Because Shinku's right, that one is made by someone else c:

Coloring, yes, sorry xD

I think you did a good job! It looks lovely, and I like the body colour c: Its neatly coloured too :D

I love the colour, it's very different.
I also love those spots! :D

This is really cool! Maybe make the muzzle and tummy area a bit darker :)

I love how you did the colouring, and the lineart you chose is beautiful!

It is a really good start! I have some tips though :3 (I mean this all positive, jsut so you know :3)

- The horse is not completely coloured. On the back of the horse and the beginning of the tail are missing some small parts. I see this on some more spots, so if you fill that up it would be better!
- This one is coming together with the one above. Some parts outside the lineart are not removed. So if you remove this, it would be waaayy better!
- I personally prefer transparent/no background over a white one. So if you know how it works, you could always keep a transparent background in mind :)
- Using a colour palette is a really good idea! Though, if I'm using it, I always make sure I hide/remove the layer with the colour palette on it. It's a small distraction and the full attention must go to the horse of course.
- The colouring and shading look really nice! The shading can use a little more contrast; perhaps you could add more shades of colours in the future. (I'm not that good with contrast either, so you're not the only one lol)
- Especially the tail can use a little more detail. Try using a small brush to make it look like "real" hair. It will be difficult at first, but it will look way better once you get to know it.

So these were my tips x] Don't take it negative, these are just some things that I wanted to share with you. Keep up the good work! It looks amazing so far!

It looks [i=amazing][/i]!

It looks amazing!

Last edited on 2016-05-30 at 10:11:09 by Pegasusdreamer

It's really nice!! And a great start!