[HG] Dapple Critque

So I made this design for a rp, and I wanted dapples. One problem. I don't have any dapple brushes. So, I drew each and every single dapple on these horses which took me about several hours because of school.

The designs - 

So what are your thoughts? The dapples are faint on the second one, and didn't quite blend in how I wanted, but that was my fault. I accidentally drew the dapples on the base layer, and when I noticed it was too late, so I just kept going. The first one turned out way better than I thought except for the fading on the stomach, but I still LOVE it. ♥

the dapples look great, especially for hand drawn c:
side comment, I only see your credit, not the lineartist's. unless you made the lines yourself you'll need to credit the lineartist on the image.

@Ducky - Thanks! And the lineartist's credits are on there, they're just white, and I forgot to change the color. If I put her on my site, they'd be visible.

I think it turned out awesome! It really looks like you had used an actual dapple brush instead of all hand painted! c: Great job!

I would never have known you had done this dapples by hand, you did a really good job on them! Very pretty.

@Siren - OMG! Thank you that makes me really happy hearing that!!♥

@Reign - Thank you!

That's so impressive! :0
I have a dapple character and no brush, and I thought it'd be impossible to do by hand. Now I'll have to try it ♥