{HELP!} My First Time Lines

Yeah horses with no facial expressions look a lil wonky :p

So glad you didn't give up! You're doing a great job :)

Well, I'm glad I've got the ears right, but now... oh just look. I can't stop laughing at how bad it is!

So, I know this was originally posted because you were wanting help with getting this turned into a tag, and I had an idea I wanted to show you to see if you liked it. I fixed up some of the lines and added in the rest of the detail and colored the image to look like my character Yirrel, as an example. What do you think of this? I only use a mouse so it's not as good as it could be, but If you like it, we could collab on it. I can send you the PSD version for you to do re-colors if you end up liking it and I can help on re-colors you're uncomfortable with. I'll also resize the image.

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Last edited on 2020-04-21 at 17:30:48 by The Cryptic Cat

Bad? I think the eye looks great! I can't wait to see how it progresses. :D

Cryptic Cat:: That looks so cute! I would have totally accepted your proposal when I first posted, but now that I've come as far as I have I think I want to finish this on my own. It may take me longer than I wanted it to, but it's really starting to take shape and if I complete this, it'll truly be the first time a piece of equine art is completely 100% my own. So, succeed or fail, I feel like this is something I just have to do. Thank you so much, though!

You are most welcome! :] I'm proud of you for continuing to push through, I know trial and error can be discouraging. I always like to leave a project sit a few hours too before coming back because I'll come to find I like it more then lol.

Progress update!!



Critique away, please. I want this to be absolutely right.

Last edited on 2020-04-22 at 11:31:41 by Mouse

Can't really help with a critique, but I have to say it's looking absolutely adorable! I'd never guess these were your first lines! You gotta keep drawing; you're doing great! I love the sweet expression on her face!

Loving it! You're doing great =D Only critique I can think of at the moment is, something about how straight that jaw line is at the top seems to be too much somehow. I don't know if it's too much line, or needs to be rounded, but it keeps drawing my eye.

Wooooooooww!! It looks fantastic!!