To Be Human-Story
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#205667 Posted on 2019-07-03 20:33:28
The being could hear the clicks and whirrs of his own body as he continued onward. He didn't know what he was supposed to be, had no clue at all. He simply went with one thought on whatever acted as his mind: keep moving forward. Footsteps clanged against the flooring with a metallic tone as he strode along, his vision sharp as a hawk's.
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#205668 Posted on 2019-07-03 21:25:03
For intriguing and a great start.
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#205673 Posted on 2019-07-04 06:47:12
This is very thought-provoking. I often wonder the same things myself. I enjoyed it a lot. :)
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#205677 Posted on 2019-07-04 15:12:06
That's awesome!! Thanks for sharing it!
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#205693 Posted on 2019-07-04 22:06:27
I love it! My only suggestion would be varying sentence length a bit so it flows better, but it's really cool!
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