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#118356 Posted on 2017-08-19 11:12:05
I just did this one! What could I improve on? Im really pleased with him.
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#118379 Posted on 2017-08-19 12:35:12
Very cool! I think the only thing I would do differently, is make the lighter color in the tail just a tiny bit more thick.
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#118383 Posted on 2017-08-19 12:51:51
Good idea, thanks for the feedback! :)
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#118386 Posted on 2017-08-19 13:00:20
Ooh nice job with this! Just to add on to what Lucra said about making the lighter bits in the tail a bit thicker, I think if you make sure they all have fluent starting/end points it would help clean it up even more. Right now there's some lines in the tail that aren't connected to anything so it looks slightly scribble-ish, which if you're using a mouse it's really hard to get it to not look like that. But looking at the orange in the rest of the flames, they're really nice and thought out, so I think if you just do that with the tail too it will clean it up and pull it together. I really like how you did the flames on the legs, they look especially fiery
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#118398 Posted on 2017-08-19 14:07:19
Thanks! Yeah, I'm using a mouse... It makes it very hard XD I'll post the improved version soon.
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#118401 Posted on 2017-08-19 14:33:04
Just did this one too:
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