Quick!!!!!

oK, So I am doing something special for Carcar-93791- I did art for her real horse. (That she leases) I will post the art with the real picture. Please be honest. She is my Best friend. You cannot see it on the real picture, but he has a odd black stripe down his tail.
I have permission to use the picture. I am friends with the lady the has hi in her board business.


Last edited on 2016-02-27 at 06:59:05 by Sablewood Farm

I think it's nice!

Thank you !!!!!

i helped make it-

Aw how nice! Super cute horse. ♥

Pose is nice, front legs look a little bit too far forward. Nice marking skills, though lines could be tapered off and smoother overall. If you're going to have black lines on the horse then it will look better with an perimeter/outer line, like a lineart.

Tail could be improved vastly, mane looks okay with that style but tail looks a bit crude by comparison. Try doing a similar thing as the mane, and don't smudge the black stripe, personally I'd use a 1 px brush and draw a few stroke in together to make it look nicer with the tail.

Personally not a fan of the blanket, but it's drawn well. Looks a little tight fitting/molded to the horse a bit though and you're missing a little bit where it's not cover the horse's back. Could use a little bit of a darker colour on the halter and use a 1-3px brush to /kind/ of indicate the knots. If you're going to outline the horse, do the same with the blanket and the halter so it doesn't look too odd.

It's a little flat looking overall but I'm assuming you're not going to shade, it's quite nice so far though.

Did you do the lines? If so, that is amazing! The tummy strap looks a bit disconnected though. :)