Story I'm Writing

Writing a story. Not an RP. Feel free to message me about it, though!
Plottt:
Cyrinto (SIR-in-tow) is a faraway land that contains many horses. Most horses in the King's empire use donkeys and mules as slaves, and now zebras are being used as entertainers before a big race. Some horses hide, for they don't agree with their town's bloody ways. Others still try and burn down buildings, resulting in them being killed. Unicorns and pegasi exist "only in myth", but many clues lead to the reality that they really do live alongside the horses.

So that you know:
Unicorn bio- very big horses who can jump higher and run faster than regular horses. horns not made of magic, instead they are made of bone. the horns do not have magic, just a lethal fighting tool.
Pegasus bio- nothing special. also quite big, wings are feathered and huge. wings also have 1 claw at the top.

Main Characters:

Narcissus: mealy light bay pony mare with a thick, regular-length mane. Regular-length tail. Amber eyes, white underbelly that is very soft. Silver chain necklace with silver Narcissus flower charm. Hides

Sijarno: very tall dark bay stallion with many battle scars. Roached mane, tail has a straight cut across bottom. 3 engraved, golden cuffs on each front leg and 3 golden earings in each ear. Dark, cruel brown eyes. Zebra pelt throw (covers back, but not blanket) around neck, will exchange throw for engraved, silver battle armor when fighting. Blood-red feather plume on head armor. Wears sharp-pointed iron battle horseshoes at all times. King of Dethens (the main town in the story)

Reynah: silvery gray mare with ice blue eyes. Has five small, silver earings in both ears and an assortment of silver chain necklaces. Has solid silver horseshoes. Queen of Dethens

Recal (Ray-call): dark gray dun miniature donkey stallion. Friendly brown eyes. Cart-puller

Last edited on 2016-02-28 at 05:53:53 by Ω ℛǡptorfanℊ™

This sounds awesome! I've been reading the Guardian Herd series and it really reminds me of it. I would really like to read your story if you'll let me :)

I read the Guardian Herd too, but I think I started planning this before I read the first book :)
unfortunately, I quit making this due to myself losing interest. sorry!

No problem, I get writers block really easy th second I can't figure out how to convey what I mean haha