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#69206 Posted on 2016-09-23 18:14:48
Hello Guys,
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#69207 Posted on 2016-09-23 18:20:21
Looks awesome good job XD
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#69208 Posted on 2016-09-23 18:21:53
Thanks ^^
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#69225 Posted on 2016-09-23 20:21:24
The horse is looking pretty good, but I'd recommending making it quite a bit smaller. It looks rather too large for the background, like it is a gigantic horse rather than a normal size one. I'd say at least half its size would help. Try to think of the horse in the context of its surroundings, and imagine how large it would realistically be next to those hills. It's easiest to get a sense of that sizing when zoomed out, like in your first screenshot.
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#69227 Posted on 2016-09-23 20:32:10
Thanks River ! The second& 2nd are zoomed in to show some more details !
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#69231 Posted on 2016-09-23 20:57:54
The mane/tail is really good considering you basically redid all of it. The only thing I would say is that the hairs look really stiff/kinda pokey at the end. Maybe try blending the ends out so that they look kinda flowey?
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#69232 Posted on 2016-09-23 21:04:24
YES ITS ALL MINE...SO WEIRD UHU !.....
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#69235 Posted on 2016-09-23 21:41:15
oh man, i would be so angry if my program crashed and i had to start over, lol. lucky for me thats never happened.
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#69237 Posted on 2016-09-23 21:51:52
I was haha. But i want to finish something so i can look back what i did years ago haha :P
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#69240 Posted on 2016-09-23 23:04:02
It's very good for your first, I mean, very good. I think you could work on making the edges of the horse less sharp, and the lighting. The background almost has an orange/blue overlay about it, while the horse doesn't, so it doesn't match, neither do the shadows on the horse, but that's an easy fix. Otherwise, I think everything else is very well done, and with practice, yes, I think you could sell these.
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#69246 Posted on 2016-09-23 23:17:35
Yes im still working on Shadows / Matching etc ^^
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