Charrie critique

This is my recently created charrie. I fell in love with a few different colors/poses and decided to sketch it out. Since I am horrible with lining......
I commissioned buck to line them.....


And then I colored away!


This is still a wip so credits for me and buck will be added. I want to know if you guys think I have improved and any critique you have to offer before I finish her.

INFO:
Name: Avalon
Gender: Mare
Status: planning to keep as personal character unless major offer comes along.
Breed: Bavarian warmblood
Color: chocolate roan dun
Markings: badger face with full pink nose and plume tail
Time spent: 5 1/2 hours

Last edited on 2016-05-22 at 16:46:07 by Silver II

I think you've improved a lot personally. Compared to what I've seen of your work when I first came back, to this piece, there is definitely noticeable improvement.

I wants this character really bad lol but anyways very nice design! I would however make a separate drawing of the necklace so it can be redrawn by other artists properly and have a color palette for it too!

What about add ons? The necklace was defiantly the thing I struggled with so will someone assist me in that?

I can help ya with that if ya like. Just toss me a PM and we'll talk about it ^_^

This is amazing, Silver! You have really improved. :) XD You could PM me about the necklace too :) Maybe make the hooves a little darker So they look different from the body?

Last edited on 2016-05-23 at 11:38:28 by Magic is Awesome

? horses with dark legs typically have a light/dark grey shade of hooves......never complete black legs. horses with white markings have a pale peach color/tan.