GOing Lineless for the....second time

Aside from cleaning it up, and the obvious lack of highlights, I would like some critique. I want this to be as good as possible. I keep saying I joined this game to improve my art, and, I feel I have, but I also feel like a 5 year old with crayons scribbling about.

What could I do to improve this? It is FAR FAR from done, I need more low lights, that I know, but, have I got the general muscular shading correct for the most part? X_x




Cleaned up a bit, did a few more low lights and some highlights, and a little color to see how it's coming out


More clean up needed, but blended more.



adjusted contrast, cleaned, shaded eye.




Annnd I sized this down to be a tag... lol

Last edited on 2016-04-04 at 13:57:04 by Buck

This is really nice! Just keep practising! XD

Thanks ^_^

Pretty much doing something art related everyday lol

XD Cool XD

so I uhh, I might be making this a tag, and I might want to collab with someone beings that my monitor is still not so good....If anyone is interested in this as a tag anyways. I may just wait until I get a good monitor.

Last edited on 2016-04-04 at 13:46:46 by Buck

i want your skillsss omg

its been a while since ive arted.. maybe ill pick up the tablet again tomorrow and see what happens. totally interested in the as a tag if you ever sell it.

I would be interested in helping with/doing the recolors if you decide to offer them for sale. :)

I would collab if interested :)

You're welcome to send me examples. I'm still undecided if I want to do them or collab.

Just finished one of my mares.

Is it bad that the only reason I now have for now lining is that I'm too lazy?
It used to be because my tablet was tiny and only filled part of the screen at once so I had to lift and move my pen making it basically impossibly to line.
But now I'm just like, naaaahhh.
I am hopefully lining on my current thingimabob

BUt yoooouuurrssss
Many crisp edges
such shading
very purdy
such art
much skills
~wow~
hadtosorry
But really i love, it turned out great!

thank you! Means a lot that people do actually enjoy what Im doing :)

I wish my tablet weren't stolen, I'd probably attempt to download my program to a kindle and doodle on it all day XD