Reworking an older piece

4/14 Update : this has been sitting around untouched for a while, I'll pick it up every now and again. I've made a little progress. This is my second day home sick and i've literally done nothing except play fallout and waller in self-pity. I'll have homework to catch up on, then commissions, then sleep can take me for about 3 years, hopefully.


July 2015 (never finished);

rework (wip);


Last edited on 2016-04-14 at 10:41:17 by Coon

Mmmmm...honestly, I like the older one better. The face proportions are much better, especially the eyes. It looks like a real expression, and reminds me of a certain old world artist I can't think of the name of. The new one is....horse faced xD Unless it's a certain face style you've developed?

But that's just me, idk.

I love them, they're both amazing but I agree with Zell; I prefer the original.

Thank you both for the honest opinions! I've been fiddling the the sketch in between other things and it looks different now. Hopefully an improvement! :)

It's way better now (no offence!) It's really original and I love the way you've done the eyes!