Sketch Critique Needed

Okay, so I wanted to do a sort of sketch auction with these two sketches and I wanted to get some critique first. Be as harsh as you want XD I would like to know what a good SB and AB would be for them as I literally have no idea and I would like to know what would make them more 'buyable'.

*Please let me know if the images don't work. I tried emailing them from my phone and I had to do a bunch of crap to get them to hopefully work, so yeah. XD* Also, excuse the size. I was too lazy to resize them









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Last edited on 2018-06-14 at 19:30:36 by Luminescent

I can't see the image. :(

Gosh dang! I logged onto my other account and was able to see them. Okay hold on. I'll probably have to upload them to DA and get the URLs from there DX

You should be able to see them now :)