Critique please

I want to sell some adoptables and I just made this one but I feel like they won't sell...And besides the point I'm not really sure what to fix in general terms of practicing.


UPDATE: 





No need to sugarcoat, say what's on your mind

Last edited on 2018-01-09 at 19:21:09 by Zest

I like it! I think it would sell, if you put it up for bid. (;

Lmao thank you RDS :)

That would definitely sell. It's not to my personal taste(I like sharp edges on my white markings instead of soft edges) but I'm pretty sure there are players on here that would snap that up in a heartbeat.

I think it looks good :D

Thanks Wiki and Champagne ♥ 

@Champagne
So edges that haven't been blurred or touched by the airbrush? Or just minimal use at that?

Minimal use is fine. Like your body markings look nice but the face marking is too soft in comparison in my opinion.

Ahhh okay, that makes sense, working on a smokey black roan right now

I love the palomino! So cute!

Personally - and this is personal preference only, not really art technique - when I buy natural horses I tend to like ones that follow genetic normalities. Like: blue eyes only with dilutes and white facial markings; hooves on white marked legs lighter; etc. But! That is just me and being picky, probably! 

I am not an artist so take these with a grain of salt, but I also think the white marking on the palomino's face is a little too blended, and I think the pen tool is a little to sharp for the rabicano - maybe use a very small brush tool of some kind or blend it more? 

Last edited on 2018-01-09 at 19:52:05 by North