Advice Sandwich

Hi, please tell me one thing you like about this mare I did for North and one thing I could work on. THANK YOU!!! I really want to get better and learning/ doing is the only way to do that 

You know how the fur on a animal goes into a certain direction. If your trying for natural designs I would consider putting Appaloosa spots in the direction of the fur flow. It'll make it look more natural. I might look at leopard Appaloosas and kind of see how they flow over the body.

The other thing is more optional but I find it softens white markings. I avoid pure white but instead use a shade darker or a creamier color.  Also I like to blur the edges of the pinto so it softens even more.  Example

Wonderful advice, thank you! It is my first appy so that was very helpful.