First Tag critique

so... I made a tag:

I'm fairly new at art, but I thought this would be good for my first tag sale.

So what can I improve on/ do differently?

Also, what should I price this at?

I think it's cute! I think if your going for something more cute instead of something realistic, this would be perfect. I would say 10k-20k at the highest? I love it though!

Dawww, this is cute. I agree with RDS, somewhere around 20k would be a good starting point. You can up your price as you advance in your artsy fartsy skills ;D

The thing that sticks out to me the most is how thick the neck is. I would thin it out juuuust a little ^.^

Thanks for the help you guys. ♥

@Ruby: It's actually the neck and the mane together, it's just hard to tell on the black horse.

Actually the mane is fine. Its the part of the neck that attaches to the jawline, it's a little too thick right in there ^.^

Actually the mane is fine. Its the part of the neck that attaches to the jawline, it's a little too thick right in there ^.^

I can redline it to show you what I mean if that might help

I think I see what you're talking about... I'll see if I can fix it.

Rofl, I just noticed what you meant by saying the line was part of the mane XD

My bad!