[Pegasus] Xmas tag critique! SNEAK PEAK updated

Been working on a christmas tag for you peeps :D

Is this any better?

How does this look? I did my own lines and background and stuffs... Yeah. How could I improve it?

I will add a greyscale soon... :)


Last edited on 2017-11-15 at 12:45:52 by ۵ Pegasusdreamer ۵

It looks cute! I think the neck needs to be a little thicker. and the patterns on the wall paper and floor need something. I couldn't tell you what. It's more the floor though for me. But I think it's a personal preference in the pattern. It's distracting.  The head also looks off, but mine always do so I'm not the one to help you there unfortunately. 

Ok, thanks! I’ll change the pattern on the floor, maybe even have it just solid red? I don’t know if that will help. I’ll edit it maybe tomorrow at some point after school :)

I agree with bela on what she said about the floor but to me the head looks a bit round at the bottom but maybe it’s just because of the angle and the neck does need to be a little bit thicker

I've made the neck thicker and removed the floor pattern. I agree, it looks so much better now!

I can't wait to see the grayscale version! Looking good so far. ♥

Thank you!