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#120356 Posted on 2017-09-04 13:36:29 Now first off, I do know it's horrible. :P But I made this, and I'd like to know what everyone thinks of it! So how did I do? And how can I make this better? 0 members like this post.	Posted By Dragonfly #89253 Member is Offline 2233 forum posts Send A Message
#120374 Posted on 2017-09-04 16:03:51 It is really cute! A great start! I am a big fan of pixel art and used to do a lot myself back in the day! My advice would be: - Outline in a darker version of the color of the object, not black - Make your outline lines thinner, 1px thin - Shading! But I really like It! I can't wait to see what you do in the future! 0 members like this post.	Posted By North #113155 Member is Offline 542 forum posts Send A Message
#120478 Posted on 2017-09-05 07:30:25 @North: That's the thinnest I can make the lines. 0 members like this post.	Posted By Dragonfly #89253 Member is Offline 2233 forum posts Send A Message
#120479 Posted on 2017-09-05 08:06:24 Not in some places! If you zoom in on places there are bends and corners you should be able to trim out some doubled up px! 0 members like this post.	Posted By North #113155 Member is Offline 542 forum posts Send A Message
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