Story Beginnings (PG-13)

I've decided not to share my story any longer as it may contain elements inappropriate for EV. If you'd like to see it, feel free to pm me!

Last edited on 2018-06-14 at 20:08:31 by Syrien 🐇 ☽

Good book! I would be happy to read more if you post it. What's it about? I like all the details.


Poor bird :(

It sounds awesome! I’m excited to read more, lol. :)

This is very interesting so far. I really love how well you've described the setting all while keeping it rather simple, giving the reader room to picture it in their own unique way... I hope that that statement made sense lol.

Thanks everyone for your feedback so far! I've updated it a little. I'm getting tired so there probably won't be any more until tomorrow. Please keep comments coming, good or bad! ♥ And thanks again!

Oh wow, that’s really good! And yay that the bird is alive!! Lol. XD

Thank you, Midnight! I'm really glad you're enjoying it. : )

I've been updating this the last few days, though mostly I've been editing it instead of writing. >>' I've just been too lazy to post it here. Now I've linked to the Doc instead, so you can check for updates whenever you want! I'll also include a note here if I've written a significant portion.

Thanks everybody for your feedback so far! I'd appreciate any and all critiques and may even gift you a little something if you take the time to give a thoughtful critique. It's still a pretty short story so far, so it may be difficult to give a really in-depth critique, but I appreciate every one of your thoughts! Don't worry about sounding rude - I've been through worse than this in college creative writing classes. xD