Help on final touches?
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#97470 Posted on 2017-03-14 10:35:42
I wanted to do a little gift for the lady I board Reno with and her family. They may have to end their lease for these two ponies soon because the little girl is outgrowing them. My brother and I took some photos the last time we visited my boy and I threw something together.
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#97471 Posted on 2017-03-14 10:45:33
To me the red color cast (especially near the left side, and somewhat in the lower right) is rather distracting and could be toned down or removed. There's some blueish banding I'm seeing on the right too, so I'd recommending fixing that up too cause it might show in the end print.
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#97472 Posted on 2017-03-14 11:03:02
I noticed the weird banding too when I uploaded it. It's not there in the program or saved image on my desktop. Only after I uploaded to the image host. Huh.
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#97477 Posted on 2017-03-14 11:33:41
I can't see the ears and forelock of the left horse very well against the black backround, or is that intentional?
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#97478 Posted on 2017-03-14 11:35:37
May have to fiddle with levels and contrast more. Black pony and black background XD
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#97479 Posted on 2017-03-14 11:36:55
Yeah, I agree it's little too saturated now. Maybe lighten the black just a little bit now, it looks a tad too dark. Somewhere in between this darkness and the original should be good.
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#97486 Posted on 2017-03-14 12:23:29
Hmmmm...
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#97487 Posted on 2017-03-14 12:26:24
I think that's looking good - something about the transition with the shadows around the horses' shoulders seems a little severe though. Perhaps feather it more? Or experiment with bringing in a little of that overlay again?
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#97488 Posted on 2017-03-14 12:27:25
I like the current version a lot, but I'm no real artist, so I can't really help much...
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#97489 Posted on 2017-03-14 12:34:37
I'll fidget with that then. So cloooooosssseeee!
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#97516 Posted on 2017-03-14 14:23:49
Just wanted to pop in and say it looks stunning Vos, I'm sure they will love it :D
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#97520 Posted on 2017-03-14 14:40:50
I love it it is soo stunning
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