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#79488 Posted on 2016-12-12 11:05:10

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i looking to improve more. just tell me what you think and any advice you have. Thanks

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#79538 Posted on 2016-12-12 13:37:27

1. If you were going for a natural look, the mane is way too yellow.
2. The hooves are also very yellow if they're suppose to be natural.
3. The nose would fade more before turning straight into pink instead of being stark white one pixel and bright pink the next... basically, the color change is too abrupt for that scenario.
Hope this helps :)


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#79542 Posted on 2016-12-12 13:56:00

Try using photos of real horses as a reference. When you see a real horse, their hooves are not starkly yellow and neither is their mane. It's about blending colors and using muted tones and greyscales and basing to make the colors fade and mesh well with each other.

As for the pink nose thing, try using a blending or smudging brush over the edge where the nose turns from white to pink. This will smudge the stark edge of it and make it blend better.

And, I can't stress enough, muted tones.

Good luck!


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#79564 Posted on 2016-12-12 15:14:54

Thanks guys. I am going take your advice. And gray scale? How do I do that?


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#79576 Posted on 2016-12-12 15:46:04

I've been doing art for almost 3 years and I still don't know how to greyscale, but you can find free use ones on deviantart. Same for linearts and all. Obviously, just follow their rules and credit properly.

Also, if you plan on doing art, I recommend getting a program like Photoshop or GIMP or SAI if you don't have one already.


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