well...

I worked on this for a couple hours. yes i know it could be better but i only have a basic painting site. so what do you like and don't?

Nothing is really coming to mind other than maybe trying a more complex design next time out? I think everything if blended nicely and the colors are natural which I personally enjoy. Also one more thing, I think if you wanted to be genetically correct bay horses don't have blue eyes? I could be wrong though 

i love horse with eyes that pop.  it was more for me than anything. and yea i will try something harder next time.

this!!!!! is gorgeous oml, the colours all blend nicely and the lines are so pretty. only thing im a little "hmm" about is the super light coloured eye?? maybe if it was a smidge darker - but thats just me, and its still stunning regardless

Thank you so much c: i tried hard to find the perfect bay color. and yea the eyes are more for me but will take then into consideration next time

Ooooh, pretty! I like how the colours blend together. The only thing I can think of to improve on is to add a pupil to its eye. But apart from that I love the design and lines! ❤️

It's pretty smooth coloring :) the only thing that stands out to me is to add a pupil to the eye. The way it is now, it looks like the horse is blind.

Looks good! I agree with what Pegasusdreamer and GWG said about the eye, it does look a bit blind. ^.^