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#114769 Posted on 2017-07-18 15:55:45

Hey ya'll!

So if you don't know already, I am now my 2017-2018 band's official Junior Drum Major! The first being a senior, obviously lol. That means I get to conduct the band and command them during field shows and parades.

Annnddd our show theme this year is The Force Awakens! Being a DM comes with a lootttttt of responsibilities, and well, one of them is coming up with shirt ideas for this show. Now, I have about 3 designs down already, but I am looking to you for help with ideas, as well as critique on the current ones.

* I ask that you please do not use these ideas or steal them as I came up with them on my own.

I created these all on my iPad and literally pixel by pixel. I mean, look at the WIP one!

Thank you.

I'll openly admit that I am no Star Wars junkie like my director, so my ideas are definitely limited. However, this is what I have so far in mind:

1. Lightsaber Treble Clef



2. Cantina Band Members



3. Lightsabers 3D


*This one is NOT FINISHED! I'm looking for YOUR help on what needs to be completed as I am terrible with curved edges and 3D things >.>

You can see the lines I have already placed for guidelines.

Any further ideas and help is truly appreciated 

I remember a thread long ago about Star Wars and so many people replied, so why not turn to a bunch of true fans (who know what they're talking about) for help?!

Anything can be removed, added, changed (color/size/etc). Taking suggestions!

Thank youuuuu 


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#114779 Posted on 2017-07-18 17:04:15

I love the first one best, it is soo creative and pretty!


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#114782 Posted on 2017-07-18 18:12:49

Thank you! I was really stuck on what to do and then it hit me! 


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#114822 Posted on 2017-07-19 07:51:20

I like the first one! I would make it less cluttered however so people can read it from a distance. I was in marching band and I miss it so much! What instrument do you play?


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#114854 Posted on 2017-07-19 11:04:11

Sara: What would you suggest to make it less cluttered? Change colors, spread the words? I'll probably remove the red coming out of the sides- it's kind of at an odd place lol.

Now that I'm Drum Major I don't play anything for marching, however, I play clarinet for Wind Ensemble & alto sax for Jazz. I also play piano just for fun c:

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#116024 Posted on 2017-07-30 08:28:46

I actually love the Catina Band members one XD But the first one is awesome too XD


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#116047 Posted on 2017-07-30 13:46:01

Thanks Wiki xD I will probably be throwing more out there later c:


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#116073 Posted on 2017-07-30 21:06:40

Love the second! As soon as I saw it I started whistling the Cantina theme. XD


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#116096 Posted on 2017-07-31 06:12:13

I love the first two! Very clever. ♥


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#116098 Posted on 2017-07-31 06:13:52

I  like the first one well done!/


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#116175 Posted on 2017-07-31 17:05:08

I love the first one!


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#116418 Posted on 2017-08-02 12:51:47

I like the second one best.  It makes the most sense in a musical context.   If you want to add more to it, maybe add some of Jabba's musicians from Return of the Jedi?


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#116513 Posted on 2017-08-03 02:51:00

Oooo, yes! That would definitely fix it. ^^


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#116521 Posted on 2017-08-03 05:51:32

Thank you all!!

Xykon: As much as I would love to, this is "The Force Awakens." The music is strictly from that movie so it'd be odd to put that in there, but it would look amazing!

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#116602 Posted on 2017-08-03 18:13:14

Aww. That sucks. The music from the original trilogy is so much better. :P


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